TELL US YOUR TALE

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Maria Eugènia Franco
2n Batxillerat
Lleida
Arabell

Chants of Truth. Once upon a time in a distant and unknown small village called Candleshoe where everything was light and splendour, was a modest little home where a milkman lived with his wife and three children, two twins called Thomas and John and the older son called Edmund, a brilliant and handsome eighteen year old boy. His parents wanted him to have a better life, but since Gregory II inherited the throne, taxes were increased and a humongous shadow covered the kingdom. People began to taste a sour life within injustice and oppression; the worst part of it was the sudden presence of a humongous ( black and scarlet) evil dragon. Dwaleth was the dragon’s name and everywhere it was pronounced happiness turned into terror. Dwaleth used to burn every field he may find and then, eat the cows and sheep of hose fields leaving people without homes or life itself. Was the king really evil? Definitely stupid and that was his real problem, because his counsellor used to do everything he wanted as long as he spoke highly of his kingdom whenever the king was around. Indeed, Cophrens ( the counsellor’s name) did a great job, the king had no idea of what was really going on, since he was too concentrated in new clothing models and modern ways of dancing and travelling almost every month abroad. Contemplating how his parents were sinking in misery and his brothers dying of hunger, Edmund decided to help bringing money doing the only thing he liked best: a fiddler. He would go now and then to the places where people used to see each other, such as streets or festivities, where he earned enough money to cover his brother’s needs. He became quite popular among Candleshoe. One day, in a glorious and fresh morning within the singing of the birds and the sweet fragrances of flowers, a monk called Friedrich of the Order of Dominicans that lived on the top of Saint Joseph’s Hill asked Edmund to play in a religious ceremony because the fiddler that was appointed to go changed of mind and decided not to. The problem was that they didn’t had money to pay, so the milkman didn’t wanted to allow his son, but the words of Friar Friedrich and Edmund’s smiles reminded him that the real misery begins when you don’t do any good in this world…so he let Edmund go to the Monastery. After the ceremony Friar Friedrich was amazed of the gift Edmund had and saw something hidden inside his soul ready to emerge once developed and decided to talk to Edmund with the excuse to make some observations of his violin. Once they were left alone in the Church, Friar Friedrich left the violin in the floor where they were sited and said: - I see a lot in you. - A lot of what Your Excellence? - You are capable of much more than to be a fiddler for the rest of your life. - I don’t understand… - It is very simple: Do you think that your parents would let you come every afternoon? - Maybe… - Would you like to learn knowledge, mathematics, philosophy, physics, arts…? - Why yes! I always enjoyed learning until… - I know…hard times always strike in our hearts, but we must fight back. - I guess so. - So, I’ll be seeing you tomorrow? - I’ll try Your Excellence. - Have a nice evening. - You too. After meditating every single detail, Edmund arrived home where his mum was washing the dishes and his father returning form milking the cows, after a deep breath, he told his parents everything that happened at the ceremony, but when he decided to tell them what Friar Friedrich had in mind, the neighbours were screaming and running so exasperating that the milkman and Edmund left the house as quickly as their legs could and saw Coprens with Gorgoroth ( a Red Beard pirate) who was taking one of the daughters the poor butcher had because he couldn’t pay the taxes. The milkman said: - What’s that bloody pirate doing here? - More respect milkman…we are doing business here… - The, oh so counsellor! With pirates? - Gorgoroth is the name…you filthy little milkman. - Don’t involve my friends Red Beard! - Shut up butcher! And give me Marian! - Why don’t you take anything else but my daughters? - Because it’s your daughters I want. - I would say you want them to see the butcher suffer. - Indeed, that is exactly the point now leave before I get interested in your wife….hehehehehehehe. - Don’t you dare think about it. - So milkman, you taught your little boy how to talk, eh? Excuse me but I am leaving. - Leave me alone you…let go of me! - You heard the lady! - So little boy…what are you going to do about it? Edmund couldn’t contain himself any more and took out his sword when many pirates began to approach to the milkman and the butcher and his son joined Edmund and his father in the battle where Coprens left after giving a lot of money and excuses to Gorgoroth who also left leaving some pirates to stop Edmund from gaining on him.Some hours latter Marian ran to her mum’s arms and thanked the milkman and his son for their courageous help, they stayed for dinner and on their way home, Edmund told his father that he wanted to learn more about life and that the Friar wouldn’t ask for money. The milkman though long enough for them to arrive home when suddenly he smiled at Edmund and said: >. The next morning Edmund left home to buy some fruits and vegetables. Then he went to clean the horses and feed the chickens. In the afternoon he went to the Monastery where the Friar was already waiting for him. He was sitting in the grass with some books and blank sheets of paper and a black ink. When he saw him he smiled and signalled him where to sit. That is how he began to learn…first accepting his ignorance and then wanting to learn. In so little time he became quite an expert on every single subject, it was amazing, Friar Friedrich couldn’t think of a logical explanation, unless he remembered that God works in mysterious ways. He became a master with swords; he could ride the must fearful horses and still…he was modest and helped whenever anyone needed his help. On the other hand, the king became confused…he didn’t knew if he was doing the right stuff even though Coprens assured him every time he met him for dinner or recess time. Dwaleth approached to the kingdom with every passing day and Coprens couldn’t hide it to the king anymore. Candleshoe began to shiver, every person that passed near the castle of the King would think what could the king possibly be doing that he never cared to solve any of the problems the village encountered everyday. Finally that day arrived… the king told Coprens to choose among the best knights of Candleshoe one how may be courageous enough to fight Dwaleth and intelligent enough not to fall for any of the dragon’s cheating strategies. Many people of the village gathered to show their skills, but when Coprens told them that they would fight against Dwaleth, only Edmund didn’t backup. On the contrary, he gave one step forward. Coprens saw this as an opportunity to get rid of Edmund, so he selected Edmund and presented him to the king who doubted because of his young age, but Coprens ( who wouldn’t give up easily) convinced the king to accept this one opportunity to free Candleshoe from the dragon’s menace. Edmund was made knight and sent to fight Dwaleth, but before he left he wanted to say goodbye to Friar Friedrich and to get advice from him: - All I can tell you Edmund is to be brave, use your heart, remember God is with you and don’t let yourself be fooled by the dragon’s words. - I wont. - Then God bless you. He left on a white horse to the forgotten Hills of Sephens where Dwaleth was awaiting. When he arrived he found more than half of the mountain covered with ashes and dust. Then, after walking for an hour and a half he found himself face to face with the sleeping dragon. Dwaleth woke up and said astonished: - What is a young boy doing here? - I came to give you some advice. - Heheheheheh…an advice to me? - Yes Dwaleth. - How do you know my name? - You must stop doing this or they’ll kill you. - And you think I will listen? - You better, because I am Edmund of the house of Demangeth and I was taught the secrets of Dragorus your herd master. - What….how….who…? - You owe me your life service for not killing you and for being who I am. And a beautiful copper medal hanging in Edmund’s neck began to shine, Dwaleth knew the boy wasn’t lying and even though he tried to cheat, his word would be his salvation or loss. Then he said: - I am afraid that you leave me no choice but to serve you Edmund of the house of Demangeth our beloved friend. I shall respond in the name of my herd as your ally. - Very well. Stop attacking everything you see and you may stay here on the condition of helping me whenever I rub my medal. - So be it dear Edmund. By the time Edmund returned to Candleshoe, the king was already waiting for him when he said: - My boy you deserve much more than money for such a valorous act. You and your family will be living in a castle…my castle…because many people have spoken of your knowledge and heart, we know you didn’t kill the dragon when you had the opportunity. You may seem young but I hear by now proclaim you my new counsellor. - But I really don’t deserve all this Your Highness. - Oh yes…you deserve much more. Come, my son… From that day on, taxes were lowered and misery left the streets of Candleshoe. People felt happiness had reborn and even the king began to pay more attention to his people’s needs and even started to sing religious songs on his free time. Everything began to grow and develop in a perfect balance between physical and spiritual needs. Coprens felt deceived and swore to revenge from being exiled. He gathered every single pirate and promised Candleshoe’s kingdom to Gorgoroth in return of his primacy and Edmund’s death. One October evening the pirates invaded Candleshoe killing everyone they would find. Edmund knew that if he didn’t hurry the whole kingdom would be lost forever. So he told the king not to give up and contacted the kingdom of Lonernthen and began to defend his people. The battle lasted many days…weeks…months…but the pirates weren’t going to give it up so easily. Edmund encouraged the king to show how much he cared about his kingdom and advised him to fight for truth itself among evil, because at the end of the day, a new light guides the good hearts out of the shadows of the dark. Some pirates who were fighting Edmund conduced him (without his knowledge) to an old and dark cave where he was left alone and suddenly herd a familiar voice: - Finally the little hero decided to leave the battle to fix some businesses. - Coprens? What are you doing here? - How dare you talk to me like that! You owe me respect. - Excuse me but my king needs me… - If !...you get out of this one alive. - What do you mean…? - Very simple…I have always hated you since the first day I saw you and you have been my nightmares since you took away my job…so …kill him boys! Edmund was surrounded by at least twenty pirates with unusual weapons such as: snakelike lances, hook shaped and thunder shaped swords. By the time they were one meter far from Edmund, he noticed it was a tramp. He held his sword with all the courage a person can have within the One who strengthens the will of good inside human souls, and as they laughed stupidly, he approached close enough to encounter the pirates who fought as if they were forced by a dark will to act like savages…Edmund fought bravely until he was faced with an enormous giant about 25 meters tall who was holding an axe big enough to tear a mountain apart. Edmund suddenly felt this was the end, but the light of hope enlightened him when he remembered Dwaleth, so he held his medallion and called Dwaleth in dragonish dialect. Suddenly Edmund felt form a hill when the giant smashed his axe against Edmund who tried to move before being trespassed by the axe. When Coprens was laughing and Edmund couldn’t hold on to a bush any longer, Dwaleth arrived as quick as lightening and picked up Edmund leaving him in safe ground while he fought and persecuted the giant down the hill. When Edmund turned his back on the hill and began to leave the place to join the king. Coprens threw one of the snakelike lances left of the last battle and it harmed Edmund in the thorax, but he got up as fast as he could and fought against Coprens who was loosing ability with each jump or fast move Edmund would unleash. Finally, when Coprens was about to fall of the great bridge of Nugantha, Edmund said: -You must understand that I am not like you and that I can’t kill you…why don’t you just give up? -Because I hate you and I always will until I see you dead. In the precise moment he was going to kill Edmund who felt on his knees because of the deep wound, Dwaleth threw him of the bridge where he would burn into ashes. Then Dwaleth picked Edmund up and took him to the castle where the king was being cured from his several battle wounds just like some of the soldiers. When Gregory II saw the dragon with Edmund, he got up from his armchair and ran to the window where now lied Edmund. He was taken to his room where he continued his battle between life and death in the presence of the king who was as sad as he could be if he had lost a son, Edmund was agonising when Dwaleth turned into a wizard and said: -This will not be the end of Edmund of Demangeth…on the contrary, it is a beautiful start, for I have foreseen with the help of the Friar, that as wise and cunning the One will not want him to leave until the seed of his example is well cemented. From now on you will live as the man who survived “power”. And Edmund lived to see his seed grow until it was time to part to that voyage in which you can only take your good acts and mistakes…